I really want a Choose Your Own Adventure episode where we can help Jimmy and Gary make all the wrong decisions and end up at like a nude bar in Tijuana... I mean, help them unite with Razorblade Fungus.
I love this! I was laughing the whole time. The dialogue is so good! Seriously, you are a master of dialogue. The chaos, the action, the antics are all so perfect. When Gary felt the adrenaline and shock because the old man turned on the lights, I felt it as if I was there. Hilariously descriptions all throughout. Thank you!
Thank you! I love writing the dialogue. It is my favorite. Probably because I talk to myself so much.
The escape scene definitely took the longest to finish. I'm not as experienced with writing action sequences, but I like how it turned out. I'm excited for the chapters coming up! It's gonna get crazy. Fast. 😄
This is wonderful and quite engaging
I really enjoyed every part
Thanks for sharing and keep writing 💫
Thank you! I’m currently working on the next chapter!
Gary somehow makes terrible ideas sound completely reasonable right up until they almost kill him. 😂
That’s why I love him.🤣
The question remains! Do they have the manual dexterity to open that battery latch? I can't wait for Chapter 3.
That is an excellent question!
I really want a Choose Your Own Adventure episode where we can help Jimmy and Gary make all the wrong decisions and end up at like a nude bar in Tijuana... I mean, help them unite with Razorblade Fungus.
I love this idea! I don't quite know how to work that out just yet but I am following your story closely. All else fails, I have your number. 😅
I love this! I was laughing the whole time. The dialogue is so good! Seriously, you are a master of dialogue. The chaos, the action, the antics are all so perfect. When Gary felt the adrenaline and shock because the old man turned on the lights, I felt it as if I was there. Hilariously descriptions all throughout. Thank you!
Thank you! I love writing the dialogue. It is my favorite. Probably because I talk to myself so much.
The escape scene definitely took the longest to finish. I'm not as experienced with writing action sequences, but I like how it turned out. I'm excited for the chapters coming up! It's gonna get crazy. Fast. 😄